Pitch

My pitch in keynotes.

What was my pitch ?

My pitch was to expline , show and justifly my idaer for my final mayjor project what was my project 

making a bus depot below will be a youtube link to youtube.com

Feedback i was gievn form the pitch 

Concept/ overive 

Claer - 2/ sostly claer 1 

Purpose

Clear 3

Audience 

Claer 2 / Partly 1

claer 1 / somewhat 1 / needsmore 1

Project details 

claer 3

Barding driection 

clear 2 / party 1 

comments : little more | reply this is vage 

Presentation strategy 

clear 3 

feasibility check

with care 3

overall comments 

One Strength

NA

One Improvement 

NA

The feedback sheets i was given lack any real feedback and provide no clear feedback or room to improve .

below is my repsone to the a bove pdf